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Nov 11, 2022Liked by Rachel Christine

I never finish anything. THIS, I devoured whole hog.

Write on, Rachel

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Wow, thank you!!

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Keep on writing Rachel. If that's what you want to do you can make it happen. Don't let anyone tell you that you can't.

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Thank you, Linda!! I appreciate your support :)

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You just proved that you have it in you to make it as a writer. Fantastic piece.

Not that you need reminding, but here's a couple poems on this topic from my favorite poets:

Harlem

BY LANGSTON HUGHES

What happens to a dream deferred?

Does it dry up

like a raisin in the sun?

Or fester like a sore—

And then run?

Does it stink like rotten meat?

Or crust and sugar over—

like a syrupy sweet?

Maybe it just sags

like a heavy load.

Or does it explode?

AND

Constantly Risking Absurdity (#15)

BY LAWRENCE FERLINGHETTI

Constantly risking absurdity

and death

whenever he performs

above the heads

of his audience

the poet like an acrobat

climbs on rime

to a high wire of his own making

and balancing on eyebeams

above a sea of faces

paces his way

to the other side of day

performing entrechats

and sleight-of-foot tricks

and other high theatrics

and all without mistaking

any thing

for what it may not be

For he's the super realist

who must perforce perceive

taut truth

before the taking of each stance or step

in his supposed advance

toward that still higher perch

where Beauty stands and waits

with gravity

to start her death-defying leap

And he

a little charleychaplin man

who may or may not catch

her fair eternal form

spreadeagled in the empty air

of existence

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I haven't read these in ages! They're so good. Thanks for reminding me :)

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Nov 10, 2022Liked by Rachel Christine

thank you for your writing Rachie, needed your words today. keep on going, you are my hero every day x

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<3 <3 <3 glad I could be helpful Katchel, you're a star and you can do anything <3

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❤️😘

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You're not only the hero of your story, but of my story, too. Keep those dreams alive, and keep acting on them. XO Mommy

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You're mine, too!!!!

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